Things we are reading about, writing about or mucking about with in Room 14!
Sunday 16 June 2013
My Dad
Here's Will.i.am's (not the really famous one, our much cooler version) piece of writing about his Dad. Not sure whether its prose or poetry. What do you think?
William, I particularly liked the image of your dad being 'as strong as a tank and as nice as a panda'. No Dad could resist the cool things you said about him! This is a piece of writing that I'm sure he will treasure. Mrs Hawke Room 1 St Mary's
To WILL.I.AM,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you showed the different things you liked about your dad, and i think it was really cool and for me it was like a poem.
From Kayla :D
William, I particularly liked the image of your dad being 'as strong as a tank and as nice as a panda'.
ReplyDeleteNo Dad could resist the cool things you said about him!
This is a piece of writing that I'm sure he will treasure.
Mrs Hawke Room 1 St Mary's
To William,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you told us lots about your dad he sounds cool maybe
you could tell us what he looks like.
To William
ReplyDeleteYour dad sounds pretty cool.
Maybe you could teach him how to cook :)
From Tessa